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for Careless Wishes

by Ducky

person Citten
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! more? now please! (patience uh?)
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh, i'd like to read more of this soon!!
person Lia
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This looks real promising. hehe they r stuck in the bathroom, I wonder what will happen next?
Can't wait till the next chappie
person Moyra
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The first three chaps are sounding convincing and promising. I like it when the plot is built up in a traceable pace and the caras to be in character.
Hermione's wish must have been quite strong for the Professor to appear in the tub. Surely, it was great fun for you to write this scene; in any case, to read was hilarious. I would give a lot to actually see the surprise on his face.
Did the other seventh year Gryffindor&Slytherins have similar manifestations of their wishes?
person Karen
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fun!
person Bella Snape
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great. A naughty little scene and wish of Hermione's hey! But who wished for the door to be jammed?
person Faith
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh they don't need to talk. What good is talking when there is horniess to take care of? Complete superb. Can't wait to see what happens now that their stuck in the bathroom and Hermione's naked under the towel. Nice.
person lisa
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH Evil cliffie!!! lol. Good chappie. and hehehe what any of us wouldn't give to make that wish and have a Severus in our tub!!!! Woot woot. Yay lemons ahead . Cant wait. more more more please. Please ohh please Update soon.
person Kris
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And of course none of her clothes are in the bathroom. XD Cant wait for more!
person juls
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Guess the be careful what you wish for got forgotten. Rofl go Hermione.