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for Desires of the Heart

by Pegasus21

person dragon88
schedule April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More please!! :) Dx
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a good start, but it is very similar to other stories, i hope that you can put some creative twist on it to keep it interesting! Keep writing!
person pittwitch
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Surprise, Surprise! I agree w/Sansa. Very interesting beginning. Will be watching for new chapters. PW
person sansa
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM

I liked your story alot so far. Poor Harry. At least he is now rescued. By Snape of all people. Looking forward to see where this will go, like who is the mystery woman? Loved the pig part. Served him right. Hope you will update soon.