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for The Heir

by Tumshie

schedule October 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

An awesome story here! I love Harry/Hermione stories, as they are my favorite pairing. Though I can also see him with other girls. ;)

person hemotem
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great read I thank you. I like what you did with the characters and find it a little funny that they didn't go and find out about the other room until it was too late =)) I thank you again for a great read.


Hemotem
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute and very sweet.
person ridert
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent one of the best Harry/Hermione fics out there are you going to continue it?
person Negima Fan
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting fic. A few things that bothered me was the speed. I know it is a one-shot, but I think this fic could have easily been made a few chappys. Another thing was the fact that the room was charmed to MAKE them have sex. I just did not like that, sorry. And the whole blood extra parent stuff annoyed me SO much but I did get over it. Finally, killing Voldemort with a gunshot to the head...... I am sorry but I am not going there. Anyway, great story, hope you can take this as a critique (sp) and not an all angle bash
person mimy
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No no no not the end. What happens next? They need a house full of black-Potters.
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. is there going to be another chapter???
person stella
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person fairyp80
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a cute story. A little bit fast paced for me, but over all nicely written. Will there be more chapters? or will the first chapter be broken down to make more chapters?