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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, needs smut tho, lots of harry fucking draco.....-grerman accent- ya! that would be fun!
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"I want to dress like a sperm, shove an ice-skate in my ass, and go balls first down an ice ramp. Ya! That would be fun!
How would you steer?
I would to Kaegles, and flex my ass down the ramp!!!"
`Robin Williams' 'Drunken Geman Gynacologist's The Lunge!
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"I want to dress like a sperm, shove an ice-skate in my ass, and go balls first down an ice ramp. Ya! That would be fun!
How would you steer?
I would to Kaegles, and flex my ass down the ramp!!!"
`Robin Williams' 'Drunken Geman Gynacologist's The Lunge!
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a great sequel! ^_^
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have to have ron and Hermie find out!! and possibly a blessing in order and some slashyness and ginny falling on her ass!!! teehee
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! i totally loved that! brilliant although some minor editing could be done, ie, no colloquialisms like 'gonna' and 'cause'... they slightly ruin the effect although pretty good nevertheless!
Hmm... a sequel eh? I like the sound of that! How about showing the actual date, maybe showing what the payback for Marcus Flint is and maybe even Ron and Hermione's reactions? That would probably sum everything up nicely! I love your dominateable!Draco and hero!Harry! Well done and please update again soon
Stef
Hmm... a sequel eh? I like the sound of that! How about showing the actual date, maybe showing what the payback for Marcus Flint is and maybe even Ron and Hermione's reactions? That would probably sum everything up nicely! I love your dominateable!Draco and hero!Harry! Well done and please update again soon
Stef
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really need to format this, with one space between paragraphs, and even breaking up some of those huge blocks of text so that they are more readable. You also want to stop using "cause" instead of "because"; look them up, they do not mean the same thing. You should also stop using "gonna" instead of "going to"; you want to use the correct term to convey your meaning.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't we all love stuff so fluffy and sweet as this stuff.
Barely any plot, just fluff!
Barely any plot, just fluff!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No i thought it was the perfect sequel. I would definitely love another part. Maybe half their date at Hogsmeade, everyone finding out and where their relationship goes in the future. If you could do that, that would be perfect.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved bnoth stories. i think for another sequal, you could descibe Harry"s coming out to either everyone, or just Ron and Hermione.
but other wise its very good.
but other wise its very good.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that's wonderful! Will Ron and Hermione support Harry's choice of boyfriend? Can't wait for Ginny's reaction! Must have chapter 2!
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice! got me a little horny... Next time i need a shag! please!
Oh, Bottom!Draco rulz!
Oh, Bottom!Draco rulz!