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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person maria joao
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
person demon0
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey it's argh... i don't like andrew por harry is right hmm is he getting raped again sigh i hope notwell hope fully they can work it out .... right ...right

ps. write more please thanks ^_^
person Anyanka
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooooo!!! please say nothing too cruel is going to happen!!!
person momoko
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person christina bush
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cyies* draco diddent act that way when ginny ponced on him, and draco should know, harry would never do anything with any one but him, all because of the pain of fire that it caused his body, but you keep on writing!!! RIGHT NOW!
person Yana
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco don't you dare
person LoveGD
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! Poor Harry! When is Draco going to realize what a great guy he has in Harry and stop being such a prick?!?
Anyways, love the story, keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
person dark_samira
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're succeeding in something few authors are able to: to make your story more interesting the more you read.
"Great" doesn't describe it properly!
I simply LOVE your Draco, and I'm eagerly waiting for the next update....well I do hope poor Harry will get a chance to explain and Draco WILL HAVE to coo him to make Harry forgive him, but only after a good spanking at least LOL
Mmmh... but I even hope Harry will take his time to forgive Draco.......Wait! I mean always inside next Chapter of course ....don't you dare leave a cliffy with Harry angry at Draco, do you hear me???
(LOL)
P.S.
Sorry for your mum, it must be difficult for her, and it's holiday time too!
person Ukagau
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nan desu ka!?? Whats going on!? BAD BAD DRACO!!! Leave poor Harry alone. Oh my. Looks like the boys are fighting again.... not good. You know, I think you actually LOVE writing cliffs. That way you know that people will review in an effort to know what happens ^_- Clever. I want to know what Harry got Draco but I do hope Draco regains his composure before he ruins Harry....hmmm....Maybe that Ravenclaw guy is the one with the potion, wanting Harry perhaps? Maybe Hermione knew the spell and he shut her up....or not. >_>...Its a wonderful Christmas present anyways, this chapter! Arigato gozimasu Shadow-chan!!!! You keep this story soo intresting and I see how Draco is still himself...-sigh-...more more please!
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT! Great job, again! Grammar wasn't actually too bad (maybe I'm reading the edited version...). Well, I hope that this review put a smile on your face, since you love reviews!!!

Slashy Snitch