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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person Yana
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what is wrong with Hermione
person diane
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhhh i haaate you!!!!!!!! how could you make dray and harry fight on xmas!! that is cruel! mean! evil!

please please please please pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease put another chapie on the net! please!
person Lace
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think most readers prefer just not having to look at the review replies. I know I do. And I'm really sorry if this sounds blunt (because that's just who I am; I don't do not-blunt), but I think it would be better if, instead of replying to emails in the chapters, to reply privately, unless it's something important. THEN you should put it in the chapter. But that's just my opinion.

You're doing a great job on this story so far.
person SugoiNoVenom
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seeing as you were so unkind as to leave me with a cliffypoo, I hereby continue this story on my own:
"Harry! Help me! I'm on my period and can't find my tampons!"
Harry looked incredulously at his so-called friend and said the first thing that came to mind: "Avada Kedavra." With that, Hermione Granger was no more.
As soon as she was dead, Draco burst into the room and threw himself at Harry's feet.
"Harry, if you don't forgive me, I'll kill myself!"
"I forgive you, Draco."
And they shagged happily ever after...

That's what you get, 'cuz I'm really friggin' bored and I felt like it!
Please update soon!
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
stupid Draco! How can he hurt Harry like that?
But isn't the spell suposed to make Harry enjoy the pain?
person demon0
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waah you make harry and draco get better sob it makes me unhappy ... but it doesn't make me stop reading ... there is something wrong with me ... but anyway keep writing your a damn fast writer it makes me happy when i see that you have updated yep that is all
person maria joao
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh godddddddddddddd
person LoveGD
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw...poor Harry. Draco really did screw up this time, didn't he? But I'm sure it will all work out in the end. And what has happened to Hermione??
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. How can Draco get his Harry back and are we getting to know what happened to Hermione?
person dark_samira
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UFF....I knew it!
Well, probabily I wouldn't have liked it in the end if Harry forgave him so soon. I hate it when in a story Harry is nothing more than a door mat and Draco could do anything to him and he's still like "yes Draco" "I love you Draco" "If you wish it, you can put a broom in my ass so that I can sweep your room, Draco".

But still....CLIFFIES SUCK!!!
but then again yours are bearable because you usually update so soon!
Good chapter as always ;)