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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person Kireania
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was...good...fun...sad...short...good...did i mention good? anyway that was indeed a quick update but alas some are just like that. hermione is going to be back to normal soon right? this is a really stupid question but... is ron evil in this fic? or is it someone else?...maybe ginny...i dunno. keep it up and keep writing a good story.

Ja ne
kireania
person Gendo
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been keeping up with this story, and I do find it to be a very interesting and good read. I'm usually not into such a sub!Harry, but you've worked it out very nicely. The cliffies are a bit much though :P

Keep up the good work, and update soon :)
person Cortney
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Sniffles* This was so intense i gota nose bleed please update soon.
person momoko
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person punkin02
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter made me cry. please update soon...I'm anxious to know whats been going on with Hermione, and what's going to happen with Harry and Draco.
person turkbro
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cliffy! oh no...you have to update soon. that was good btw.
I especially liked the ring.
person krista
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
huh? krista is my name. actually, i can't really remember what my username is. anyways, ahhhhhh, you're killing me with the cliffhangers! i luv the story, i almost cried, for harry, or draco, i'm not sure who i feel more sorry for.
person krista
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooo! cliffy! but besides that, love the fic. especially eight! lol!
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person doesitmatter
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh i hate cliffs,
but this story is totally worth it
so update soon.