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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person queenb23
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooo please let draco do some kind of awesome thing that makes harry forgive him. this story is so good. i cant wait for more. i love it!!! Man what's up with Hermione. I think Ron might be doing something seriously bad to her
person Christina
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Angst! I love angst (only because I'm "slightly" twisted) Anyway, I really liked that chapter. Ii don't know who to feel bad for anymore, I mean sure I feel bad for Harry, but I can't help but feel bad for Draco.
Why must you leave us a cliff hangers? *sob* I eagerly await more chapters. Keep up the awesom work!
Christina
person Ukagau
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...that sucks! Now both of them are sad/angry and Draco royally screwed up. Nan desu ka is Japanese, it means roughly 'what!?' or 'what is it' literally. Arigato gozimasu is also Japanese for thank you (the formal) and Shadow-chan is just putting a respect marker on your name ^_- Sorry! I can tell you love cliffys...this soooooooo isnt what I wanted them to be doing during break *sigh* Time to kill the Ravenclaw....slowly...>D. Herminoe is back.....but what is going on with her and Ron...and...and...and...and kiss and make up or somthing scene is needed!!! Poor Draco...he has to feel like shit now!
person pink_fog
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ryu
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...just finished chapter 7. I really wish you would let Prof Snape teach Hermione some obedience. He does that so well. But I guess your not going to buy into that ship. Ah well. Heres to Drarry smut to come...
person Ryu
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaw...Harrys so cute!!!! I want a Harry plushie!!!!!!
person Melly
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this since chappie one, and I love it. I look for it's update every day. I'm going out of town today so I'm really sad that I don't get to see what happens for the next seven days. *sob* Great chappie
person YamiBakura
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19:

Well, I'll be honest. I really wasn't too impressed with the first few chapters. BUT (yes, there is a but) I kept reading, and I'm glad I did! I really like it now, and that's a TERRIBLE place to leave off!! Update soon!
person vibora
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooo! how could you!?! another cliffie!?!?! update soon! best effing story ever! ^_^
person Kireania
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was...good...fun...sad...short...good...did i mention good? anyway that was indeed a quick update but alas some are just like that. hermione is going to be back to normal soon right? this is a really stupid question but... is ron evil in this fic? or is it someone else?...maybe ginny...i dunno. keep it up and keep writing a good story.

Ja ne
kireania