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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person mandy
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! this is awsome. draco really seems believable, not like in those stories where he becomes a total softy right at the begining. i love it and i hope for more soon!! (longer chaps please) good job ;-)
person mphoenix
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update this again. i demand you do it again.
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
where's the sex!?!
person amyordinary
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like what I read so far, and I look forward to more.. though, I wonder, is this a happy ending story or not? I mean, the warnings make me think not, but the start of the story makes it seem like it could turn out that way.
person moira
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gaahhh! You can't stop there! More. More. More..... Please?
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What happens next? Need chapter 4!
person strawberry_buttercup
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww poor harry, draco is so mean! is he gonna stay that way, or is it all part of his master plan?
person amyordinary
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the chapter... honestly, as long as harry and draco both end up alive and happy, what else matters?
person Princess Bob
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent.....it was great.....can't wait for more
person Alicia
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, you've updated twice without my knowing. That really doesn't happen often with stories I like. Sooo, to take the blame off myself (Lord knows I hate being the faulty one) I'll just tell myself that your a fast writter. LOL, it works, you see, because my conscience is satisfied for the lack of review for chapter two AND it satifies me to know that I'll be able to read new posts for your story often.

;P

Seriously though, great chapters. Draco's viciousness as left me in a swirling trap and I'm on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for the next update!

Though, you should really look into finding yourself a beta. I don't mean to affend you, I swear! It's just a small bit of advice. Beta's are life-savers, lol.

Anyway, update soon please!!!