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Ahhh! A cliffy! I think your just doing this to torment your readers, lol. But then again, what writer doesn't like to torment their readers every now and then? You've left me hanging again, it's so unfair. I'm overflowing with excitement for the next chapter. Don't keep me waiting too long, please!!!

As to your question, a beta is someone who looks over your work before you post to make sure there are no mistakes. They correct any spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors. They also (if you want them to) will give you advice on how to make your story better. Basically, they read it over and make sure it's easy to read and understand for the reader. A pre-reviewer of sorts.

It makes posts a little slower but in the long run it's worth it. While you may find no errors when you read it, your beta could find things you had no idea you had missed.

If you decide to find one you can post a request on the main HP page under "Beta's" or you can post on the main forums. And should you find no one you want to take on, I'd be happy to help you out. I know two beta's who would love to take another writer on or I personally can work with you. Just say the word!

Ok, enough if my rambling, lol. Update soon!!!!

OOOOH!!! Please do continue soon! The anticipation is killing me! Ok, i've put a lot of exclamation marks here, but I'm really just trying to say that you wrote this quite well and that you should definitely keep on writing this and never give up and have plenty of faith in your ideas! (Secretly, i hope it ends Happy *hint*hint*) lol.

ch 1 - Nice little prologue. I haven't read the 6th book, I stopped at 4, so let your imagination take flight!

Pretty...more pleasse.

I really like this fic, it's very well written, it's amazing this is your first!. Stalker!Draco is like... guh *dies*, so evil, sexy and predatory, and I love this rubbing thing he does... naughty boy. Poor Harry, he's just a pretty prey, he doesn't stand a chance! *goes to read the third chapter*.

Must have MORE!. Draco is such a sadistical bastard, I love him *grins*. Harry is totally sub, he got hurt but didn't fought back.. he whimpered and cried. Things aren't looking too good for him, nope, not at all. Must find what happens NEXT!.

okay update this soon. the next chapter needs to be longer tho!

It is good, but I hope harry isn't going to be all wimpy and draco becomes nicer...still I really like it and I can' wait to read more:)

Ooo, please update. This is really cool. And thank you so much for making Draco the Dom. There are too many fics with draco as the sub, just cuz he's pritty don't mean he's submissive.

And.....

THIS FIC IS AWESOME!!!!

I have to say that the little snippits you're giving me are intersting to say the least - update soon okay?