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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person wizli
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffie, you know we all want to read that chapter! ^_-. I wonder if Harry is gonna be loud (but please, not like Hermione) or will be all humiliated, crying and all that. What an evil question, seeing that here we have a non-con in our near future, but stalker!Draco is so hot, whispering "pretty prey" in his ear... *sighs*. The chapter are a little short but well, that's your privilege as an autor: you do exactly what you want! *grins*. Good work, keep the updates coming!.
person Demon 0
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!! CRIES GIVE ME STORY NOW GRRR OR ELSE I WILL UHM WELL I DUNNO GLARE AT YOU
person thuyhy
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wooo This story is too good LOL I just can't wait to see next chapter -grins.
But I wonder ..no I hope that they will love each other ^_^
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! pleeeeaaaaasssseeeee update!

I loved the hermoine and ron thing, that was hilarious.
person Lissa
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU GIVE UP THE HOSTAGES IMMEDIATELY!!! Your demands will not be met. If you let them go now you may get a lighter sentence.
person Soreceress
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! wicked story but can you have longer chapters?
person Snowbound
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool story so far, I like the way you leave cliffhangers (good way to get people to review lol) can't wait to find out what happens next Update soon PLEASE!!!
person mimi
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update,update,update!!!!!

I hope everything turns out alright for harry, I don't really like non cons...unless they're together in the end.
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story pretty prey is good but it is really short. It comes off more like a one shot story than anything else. It makes it seem like you already finished the story. But you just want to chop it up to bug the readers. I like your story i just wish you will post the rest of it.
person SugoiNoVenom
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, please!