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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person Elric Maxwell
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was fucked up what he did...I can't wait to see what that tattoo does! EM
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally am a fanatic and I heart your fic :)

my name is lucy
person Lissa
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm... Ron and Hermione suck.
And umm... Draco sure went to some elaborate stakes ... poor pitiful Harry.
(Even though I still love him.)
person Sorceress
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay updates! Hmm being lazy rocks but fast updates are better:P (Hint hint...?) Keep updating!!
person Kireania
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty good non con but i would suggest that if there is to be more in the future that you explain that harry's body os reacting as well even if it is involuntary and one question there was a line where malfoy plunged the knife into his stomach. did you mean harry's stomach or draco's? and did you literally mean into the stomach area.. that was the only line that confused me. I love it though and i can't wait to read more. please update soon. ja ne
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! Hope you update soon!

Slashy Snitch
person Karen
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Every part of your story is great but they are to short
person Lu
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to read more
person mphoenix
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i got an update. *looks placated for a moment*
where's the rest? *taps foot*
person Kaze
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHH!! make it longer!! Next chapter please!!