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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person Cristy
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool! Update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. Cant wait to see what happens next!
person Kireania
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I will beg for the next chapter in fact i'm doing it now. pppllleeeasssee update!!!!!! i like this and i love draco!!!!! kk ja ne
person Moyima
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was intense. I cant wait to see how that spell affects Harry!
person LoveGD
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good! Can't wait for more!
//LoveGD
person Jen
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh very nice! I'm very interested to see how Harry and Draco's relationship will progress. Please make Draco be nicer to poor Harry. They need each other! :) Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more. Luv, Jen XO
person Demerious
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Dieu! ...Bloody hell.

That was brilliant! Oh my gosh... You're really good at building tension and well, it's just so impossibly impossible to imagine How you do it! Argh. (I'm speechless; so this probably sounds like a garble of nonsense) What I'm trying to say is that this is good and you should keep keep keep writing!

It's good how you paint their characters. Can definitely see the personalities but i hope to dieu that it has a Happy ending (*hint hint) Lol. Sorry, I'm a sucker for happy endings.

On the other hand, how you keep to making Draco soo devilicious is intoxicating. And I can understand the drive and thrill in having a slight Harry so vulnerable... Argh, you've got me addicted.

So, yes. Keep writing ^_^
person Demon 0
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
argh it was short hmm well it's better then sit ing there for a year with nothin and then have the author say they won't write ever again so hey i love yah man be happy write hinh hint..... please
person vibora
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* dom!draco....also my fave.. ^_^ update soon!
person SugoiNoVenom
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cough*...I REALLY don't think that Ron truly wants to know what's been up Harry's arse, but it would be funny to tell him once Harry and Draco have...bonded. Please update soon!