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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person manx
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, this chapter was too muddled. Harry didn't seem all that concerned over Hermione. Don't you think he'd do EVERYTHING HE COULD to help her?!?! His whole attitude here (whether you meant it that way or not) is "Oh, well, too bad". We all know that Harry would push aside his own problems to try to straighten out his friends. Where is the concern?
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who is Jennifer? Did I miss her introduction? Who is giving her the potion? What is Dumbledore's involvement?
person eroburn
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am a fan of the great 8 lol.
person minya
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
apparently each batch of babies a snake has can have multiple fathers
person Gendo
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
20 Chapters and still going good, and I'm really liking Eight. He's an amusing sidekick familiar for Harry.

Keep up the good work, and Happy New Year!!!
person Ukagau
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-sniff sniff- Poor Hermione! I hope she is okay.... is it Ron doing this to her? I thought he loved her....-sigh- Did Dumbledore do it?,...ahhhhh to many questions. Though, I must say I do love Eight. He so cute, even if he can't wink ^_-. I hope you had a Happy New Year by the way ^^. Continue on, I can't wait for more juicy info and maybe a little Draco kissin ass! ohhhh yeahhhhh
person kumori
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i'm lost. did Ron put Hermione under a love potion? or was it some one else? update soon please.
kumori
person vibora
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* Eight is so awesome! thnx so much for the quick updates! i still can't believe draco did that! :( hope both harry will be able to help hermione soon. update soon! ;) best fic ever!
person LoveGD
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liked this chapter (nr 20). I can't wait to see what you do next!
//LoveGD
person The Doctors In
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have quickly see that I will need to ignore the autors notes in order to hope to enjoy this story. They are distracting and unnecessary.