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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person thrnbrooke
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 9! Just what did he do?
person zoe
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA its a 2 side curse, Malfoy should realy check into things more before jumpping head first
person thuyhy
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ I like chapter 8 , this story is so good LOL
person Briar
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahah Eight RULZ
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I am THE GREAT EIGHT!" Lol, nice personality for a snake, I think. Great Job so far! Oh, and I want to tell you something...Don't be pressured by reviewers exclaiming that you should update sooner; if you think your chapters would be longer and/or better if you took somemore time on them, then that would be the best choice. Readers and Reviewers LOVE the long chapters (believe me, I would know). So, I hope to read more of your story when you update next!

Slashy Snitch
person dar
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO!!! more smut would be nice, yummy!!! keep up the good work!!! longer chapters, but that's because i really like the story!
person Demerious
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
See! I reviewed! (smug smile) now you've got to keep your end of the bargain and update faster! Hehe.

Aww shucks. I don't write reviews just to flatter people. They're from the heart; honest, honest.

...And to just end it there! I'm so gonna keep thinking about what's happened while I'm away... Lol. Can imagine banging into the Great wall of China while thinking abt this.

:) Eiri.
person LoveGD
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry...;) Good to see Herm and Ron getting what they deserve! Keep up the good work!
//LoveGD
person mphoenix
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great. amazing. update soon.
person Moyima
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco really got him! I love a dom.Draco-- so Sexy. More soon please!