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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person zoe
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved Sirius's reasoning for giving Draco the Black libary. Cant wait to see why you love the next chapter so much
person katie
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... that sucks that dracos spell backfired like that... but at least hes feeling how harry feels
person SugoiNoVenom
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!
I come back from a chorus fieldtrip (my mom didn't let me take my laptop--i was going through severe withdrawal symptoms, but w/e) to TWO chappies of this most excellent story!!!
*is happy*
^_^
Please update soon...
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so can't wait for chapter 10! Something went wrong.... *ahem* right... Hahahahah!
person Moyima
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahah I'm so glad Draco's spell is backfiring! This is a very hot story, I'd love to see longer chapters, but your fast updates are making up for it. Please keep it up!
person christina
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! i must say, this story is getting very good,,,,thank you so much for recognizing me on chapter 7! i very muck liked it..., well update more!!!! MORE!!! becuase even though its out of the ordinary, its becoming very cute
person raycoon
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep writing i love it! at first i was a little worried about what draco did to harry and all but for some reason i wanted to read more lol!
person zoe
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ great chapter, I found thier stair off ammusing and Dracos blow job HOT. I cant wait to see what Dracos notes turn up so plz update soon
person Dracos Pet ~not logged on~
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg,omg omg omg ::drools:: omfg.....:dies from happyness:
person yesIam
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking the direction this is taking. *waits for next chapter* *sobs waiting*