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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH HA! Ginny bashing; no wonder it was so fun to write! Can't wait for more!

Slashy Snitch
person Lissa
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!!
HERE IS MY REVIEW ... I'M NOT BEING PATIENT... SEE??!!!
person vibora
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! draco to the rescue! i love it when he gets possessive! ^_^ update soon!
person zoe
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good show cant wait to see more
person demon 0
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor poor harry well draco will make it all better cough cough sex cough anyway stupid woman and to bad eight didn't bite her it would have been funny...well at least to me he should bite her later so harry's magic messed with the spell and made the mates or at least that's what eight said the maye thing i mean, i just guess it was harry's magic well writ more please thanks i still love eight he's the greatest
person rabidsqurl
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm very much enjoying the story...but I'm wondering what happens to you between your author's notes and your story. Your writing style changes so much that it almost doesn't seem as though it's you writing it. ><
person Elric Maxwell
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*claps her hands and cheers*

Yay!!! You updated, I'm so happy! I loved that last chapter, it was too damn funny! He needed to smack her ass around! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! XD EM
person Kireania
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHO HAS FLAMED THEE. I SHALL AVENGE YOU AND YOUR HONOR... how dare people flame such a wonderful story. I love this chapter cause its so sweaty and sweet. Betcha a buck that they wake up and scream at each other like bloody murder and try to act like nothing happened. I wonder is this going to be like they are soulmates and that's what happened to the bond magick? But once again I hope you really won't let the flaming idiots get you down you obviously have a lot of support from others including myself. Never give up!!! I mean seriouly if you give then what about THE GREAT EIGHT...how would he feel...most likely lonely...and don't forget about the boys cause i swear they're getting the best that they have had in a while. Well i hope there are no more flames and that your writing goes smoothly.



Ja ne
Kireania
person Anon
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man ginny shouldn't have done that, it was really good.

...Eight should have just bit her :)
person Yana
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Harry