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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person Lissa
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What flames... it's like mommy always said... "they're just jealous"
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! AHHHH! Finally, some smut...Though, I'm not one to talk...it took me what? 17, 18 LONG chapters to get to the smut between Harry and Draco in 'Picking Wildflowers'. I look forward to your next update!

Slashy Snitch
person theTigersFire
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story...you are forbidde3n to stop writing it until it is completed...or if you do stop...at least send it to me...*insert big puppy-dog eyes here*....please....honestly i wasn't to fond of how it started...but i like where it's going...keep up the good work ;)
person Amina
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing ^^
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*flames* with passion; Haha! Really though I'm liking the story so far, truly. It's very different from most out there, very original and I'm loving every word!
person Moyima
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was intense. *shivers* Okay-- now you've set a bar for yourself! One thing that I really like about this fic is that I can see you improving your writing in leaps and bounds. Great work. Keep moving up!
person madlodger
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 12
'Harry could barely make out anything except the feeling of bliss and liquid silk wrapping itself around his naked body.'
That was a poetry in prose, very nice, indeed.
I enjoy this story a lot, top Draco rules. He did screw up with the spell somehow, I am sure of that:)

Good job, krista_shadow.
person demon0
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i would give you words of advice if i saw any thing but usually i don't notice it so i love just reading yep my mind atomaticaly corrects any thing so i can't go and tell someone hey in paraghaph 2 line 3 i did'nt know if you mean me ,he ,she ,they or ,it sigh that would annoy me if i went on and on about stuff like that when i can't write that well myself so iam in no way someone to judge by the way i like your story i rarely review and yours is the only one i have been constant with go you that means i really like this story or you put a spell on your story so people must reviewit like mind less zombies happy but still mindless zombies but hey that's ok with me i like being a zombie... WTF how the hell did i start talking about that stuff wow iam werid please write more soon was all i relly was going to say but my mind just didn't stop for that so you got the thing about zombies and lots of other things as well so iam going to stop now ^_^ or am i *evil laughter* coughs and dies I am OKAY REALLY
person MMB
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, While I thought the violence went a little too far in establishing the bond, I enjoy the thought of Draco getting what he deserves. Naturally, I hope he starts to feel the same pain that Harry feels whenever someone touches him. What about telephathy between the two of them? I'm interested to see where you take this story; it's very inventive. Thank You.
person Kermit
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter want more and longer.