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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person Malin
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love u for updating so often! A few grammar mistakes, but nothing too big. Longer chapters would be nice, of course, but i'd rather have the quick updates. Seems to me like harry's gonna hate draco forever for what he did. Hope not...
person Yana
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool chapter
person vibora
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drools* awesome chap! i. love. this. fic. it makes me all happy inside! ^_^ update soon!
person ochibi-chwan
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! This is !possessive draco at its best! and also submissive harry at his best also! heh, and the smut is better than good! Don't worry about the flames! They're just jealous that they can't write the yummy smexiness fics that you write! (see the unashamed flattering? wink wink!! but then again, it's not flattery if its true!) lol, i love the story a lot, can't wait to read more!
person Anyanka
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was great, really!!! can't wait to see Harry's reaction
person momoko
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it
person thuyhy
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm don't misunderstand me , I said I love you because you write this story LOL
They love each other LOL I like this
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
who would flame you, you're awesome!

I loved this chapter they got their sexin on :)
person KitKat
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess someone didn't like the slash and said something about it even though there where warnings? *sigh* I hate it when people do that. Anway just ignore that person I think your doing just lovely so far. Keep up the good work. If someone flames again just remember this even if someone writes something good or does something good or helps there will always be a critic. But please don't stop the story there are still people like me waiting for another chapter :D bye!
person dark_samira
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I've just started reading your fic today, and I find it so good!
I'm pleased with the twist (?is the word making any sense?) you made happen in Draco's behaviour: I can't stand fluffy-dracos but cannot even bear an overly evil dracos too, I mean how am I supposed to want a bastard-draco to get with poor-little-harry?
Ok maybe some chapters are a bit too short, and sometimes there are some silly mistakes, but who am I to judge?
All I know is that I just had a sort of little cli..x just reading the last chapter, and now I feel all flustered, and I'm at work dammit!