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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person Shelik
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_T more I want to know what will happen ^_^
person kristal
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this chapter
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 21!
person krista
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah... very few people have this name. i'm often mistaken for kristi, or krystal, or kristina, etc. rather annoying. but anyways, da da da... i love plot twists! and eight is crazy hilarious. much love, in general, keep it up, please!
person Kireania
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay hermione told harry!!!! i'm glad she got that much out. ...i cannot think right now so i'll review again later when my brain is working.

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Kireania
person punkin02
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snake was quite humorous this chapter :)

Who's Jennifer, and how does she know who's doing this to Hermione...
person butterpie
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well you certainly left some clues about Hermione's behavior, but now I want to see someone trying real hard to show Harry just how sorry he can be. Love seeing Eight again. He's more sensible if somewhat sensitive for a snake.
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now we still haven't got more info because I agree with Harry. Ron is hopeless in potion and has no money.

I hope that Draco will start to woo Harry back in the next chapter!
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Hope the next is up soon, but happy new years!!

Slashy Snitch
person Christina
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad there is another chapter up. I must say I am not infatuated with this story, I do love the twists and turns in the plot...thay make me giddy...any way, I really want to find out what's up with Hermione and what is Draco gonna do to make it up to Harry! I must have more! Please keep up the wonderful work, I do so enjoy reading it.
Christina