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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person ningchan
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE
can i review more than once so that it looks like you have more so you update faster? I LOVE THIS FIC!
heh heh heh
pleeeeeeeeeeeeease! mooooooooooore!
i beg like harry begs draco to fuck him!
pleeeeeeeeeease!
*grins*
you rock
love ning
person Phoenix 5
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What am I to say ? PLEASE continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person maria joao
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woooowwwww..loved it...I'd like that all authors updated their stories everyday like u :D
person Anyanka
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was really good, but you're telling us soon what the vision was about, right?!^^
person strawberry_buttercup
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They seem to be getting more comfortable with each other, unknowningly though. its so cute! and harry didn't protest in that chapter, like he's accepted it...good it's about time. lol.
person Ukagau
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Liked this chapter alot! I want to know who was in the ball!!! agggg! I love how you keep an intresting plot as well as the relationship! whoot! I also think you writing style is awsome, Its easy to read and has a good flow to it.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I've sooo gotta have chapter 15! What is going on with Hermione?
person Zoomi
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell no!! Ron did something to Hermione to make her this way!! But that's not why I'm flipping out... why'd you stop there??? I'm dying to know what happens next!!! I love the whole bond gone wrong! Oh and what's this about Draco starting to understand Parseltongue?! Because that's just fucking hot! Though Parseltongue as a kink is fucking hot too. *grins* Well, update soon!! I love Eight, by the way!!
person vibora
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nooooooo! you can't stop there! *desperately begging on hands and knees* update soon! ^_^ best fic EVER!
person Kayo
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Updates! And fantastic updates at that. So why doesn't Harry want a truce? Ha, I like Eight.