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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! I love this story; how ever did you think of it? This is quite good. ::stops:: Wait, did I jsut call this fic...good?!?!?!? EWWW! No, this fic is BLOODY AMAZING! (WOOOOOOOOO!!!!) Lol.

Slashy Snitch
person momoko
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapters, bye
person Elric Maxwell
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, sex in the woods, there's nothing better! ^_^ You're right, I loved it! I love how possesive Draco is! EM
person RabidSqurl
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. Lol, I didn't mean to upset you. *hugs* It's just that I'm uberly suspicious because some friends of mine have had their fics stolen and posted out there, so I'm all *eagle-eyes*. ^^

Love the last few chaps you've done.
person SuicidalBunnies
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww, sorry i didn't review last time. i once again managed to bypass the story entirely. i don't even know how! but i'm reviewing now, and i must say that both chapters were excellent! so please update!
person Nikki
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU SHOULD SO CONTINUE! Do you know what happens when you don't continue?!?!?! Bad things! So bad...i cant even think of them! Aha! I will make you see Hagrid in a Thong if you don't continue...ahahahaha im evil enough to be the new dark lord! please continue!
person kumori
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this was a good chapter. i really like this story. keep up the good work.

kumori
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! what's happening with hermione.
...Loved the sexin at the end :)

lucy
(I'll write my name on the bottom from now on)
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!

I love your fic; you know just how to make everything into proportion. My fic, Picking Wildflowers, is like...::makes farting noise with mouth:: when it comes to time perspective. I'm on the 19th chapter, and School hads just begun! Sheesh. Lol.

Again, love it!

Slashy Snitch
person wizli
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco is so dominant and powerful here, I want one of those Draco's for myself *pouts*. That sex scene at CoMC was pretty hot, I love it when Harry and Draco are so desperate for each other!. And the plot, yeah, I love the plot too ^^ . Nah, really, I'm really intrigued with the blotched bond, the secrets of the Black's library and wondering what's Draco going to do about his bond-mate and the little Voldie issue... I was forgetting Hermione's misterious words in Myrtle's bathroom and Eight's warning about Dumbledore... Yeah, there's a lot of plotlines besides Draco and Harry's irresistible passion! (but that's the best of all, don't you think? ^-^).