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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person dark_samira
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's 7:35 A.M. here and I've been up writing my dissertation for an hour yet.
A little break, and there it is: chapter 16!
Thanks for the update!
Soooo cuute, my little drakie-poo!!!
oh, and I read again the passage I thought was talking about Hermione cheating on Ron just to realize Harry was talking abot 'Mione betraying HIM (Harry).....sob
I'm being a good girl, am I not? reviewing all chapters.
*shakes hands by myself*
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now Draco knows about the scar and some of the prophesy. We the readers and of course Harry know that the potion is a love potion. The problem is we don't know who brewed it or who the intended victim is. Though I'm thinking its meant for Harry or Draco.
person wizli
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fluff, yay!. I write reviews 'cause you asks for them so prettily *grins*. Draco is comforting the distressed Harry and seems to like it, how different from the cold hearted bastard from the first chapters!. Poor Harry, it's so sad to have your future dictated by a prophecy... to kill or be killed. I'm sure Harry's real involvement in the war was a real shock to Draco, who seems to be rather naive in these DEs bussiness with his misconceptions and crappy plans (even canon!Draco makes crappy plans!), but I'll wait to see what he really thinks about all this. The bond is evolving really nicely, it's good to see them accepting it. Interesting use of th ebond by Harry, by the way. Misteries, misteries... who's brewing that all-powerful love potion and who'll be the victim?. Eight is very funny and knows a lot of things, I hope we'll have more examples of "eight wisdom" in the future chapters ^^.
person Elric Maxwell
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this suspense you keep giving me!!! XD You keep pulling me in! MOOOORE!!! EM
person maria joao
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MOOOORRRRRRRRE
person Yana
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeh you should be Draco
person Kireania
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate not being able to go on the internet for a while cause then i don't have the chance to review each chapter like i should. well i just read the last three chapters i think and i love them all. Is hermione the one in the vision??? that would be... interesting. anyway i love the wahy they are being all sweet and cuddly towards one another. i can't wait for the next chapter.

Ja ne
Kireania

ps i promise i'll be a better reviewer.
person Ukagau
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! So cute...poor Draco..things never go easy for him with Harry. More clues!!!....but to short nooooooooooo!!!! At least you update fast. I don't think I've seen an author update as qucikly as you. And, your chapters are still good! I do love your writing style. Don't stop...more more more! I must have somthing to read while the family is over and I am hiding! Please!
person Ukagau
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I reveiwed again...cause....maybe if I do...you will update faster ne? Gambatte with your writing!!! (I've read this....4..5 times...ack)
person SuicidalBunni
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
catching on? *blink* gosh darn it! and awwww, soooo sweet! i loved it!!