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for Pretty Prey

by kristashadow

person maria joao
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loooovvvvveed itt...please update soon...give me a christmas present..pleaseeeeee
person Sorceress
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brill story still- update as soon as you can after christmas!!
Merry Christmas and happy new year!
person nightsummer
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!! that is sooo good i cant wait to read more! i love the way you write!
person ochibi-chwan
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooo, kute chapter!!
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! Aww, while the rest of us are freezing to death, you get to enjoy the warm sun!
can't wait to read more!
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was sitting here, trying to decide what to write for the review. usually i give some sort of critism, but for this story i honestly cant think of anything. i do have a suggestion. instead of making readers scroll through your review replies, write them at the bottom. and i have a guess: dumbledor is making the mind controling potion and is funding ron for some reason or another. BTW, i love Eight, seriously, if I ever get a snake, that's what I'm naming him
person wizli
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes Harry, eight is only slighty frightened by Hedwig... ^-^ It's lovely to see the nice way in which Harry and Draco's relationship is evolving, they're even acting all coupley now!. And they share that ye olde Hogwarts' broomclosets love!. I have a feeling there's trouble brewing from more than one front (well duh, you've left several clues about that!) but before that I hope you'll let us enjoy at least one hot, sexy little love scene with the boys sharing some very... intense quality time during their Christmas holidays. Please, spoil your devoted readers! *grins*. I have a small question, what happened with Pansy and the rest of Draco's lovers/yearmates/friends?. Why didn't they notice there's something really strange happening with him?.
person yesIam
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shadow you know I love you and all, but too fucking short. *sobs* and I do love Eight too!
person SugoiNoVenom
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG--you live in Australia?!? Thats is so AWESOME!!!! Except for your choice of words slightly leaning towards atrocious (" He told Eight[,] who just looked at him seriously and said
person momoko
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I already reviewed to this story but I will try withe chapters to come.
Draco is so sweet sice he is under the spell but he should try to give Harry more time to get used to it.