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wow you write fast or i get way to easyily distracted by things ... oh shiny.... hmm what oh yes sorry bout that any way please write more i'll try to see it before yo write another chap after it hmm that sounds weird but i hope you understand most people say they can't understand what i write but hey it happens ok right then see you soon... well you know with out the seeing k bye now

Okay that chapter didn't solved anything but it was sweet :-)

I love where the story is going keep it up and please expose who is the unknown person in Harry's vision soon.

you're awfully expecting a lot. reviews are gifts from readers, not something that they have to give. i hate authors that tell us that they arent going to write if we dont review. your writings not even that great, so your arrogance is not needed. i wouldnt say your writing is awful but its nothing spectacular. the plot isnt something overly exciting either. it aint nothin new, so stop demanding reviews from us. there are a few mistakes here and there. a lot of run on sentences but nothing overly annoying. it could also do with more detail. anyway, its nothing great but its alright, seeing that its your first story. perhaps you should get a beta.

Clues what clues??? I am really dense in that department srry. Oh well as usual i can't wait to read more. and i love the fact that they are getting along now. have fun writing more. at least as much as i will ha ve reading it.

Ja ne
Kireania

Clues what clues??? I am really dense in that department srry. Oh well as usual i can't wait to read more. and i love the fact that they are getting along now. have fun writing more. at least as much as i will ha ve reading it.

Ja ne
Kireania

I just wanted to say that I really like this story. Harry's so cute and sweet, and I love Draco as a dom cause I just have problems seeing him as anything else(although I have read some good stories where they take turns). Well anyway, I love the story and keep up the good work.

good chapter, I like it
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

its proberly so Ron and Hermione can hav sex in peace

*glares* well lucky you, with ur sun and beaches and pools. and what do we in bloody england get? rain and fog and no snow!! *sobs* but hey, going to scotland, so i mgiht catch snow! Cant' wait!! i'm gonna be cold. anyways, love love love it!! pleaaaassseeee update!!