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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED it! Don't worry, you did absolutely excellent!
Blaise is so dashing. So gorgeous! When he mussed his hair and made it all dishevelled...that had me going, that did. I got all flustered. And the leg move, whoo! I wish I was in Hermione's place. Good ol' Blaise.
I think you did an excellent job of characterizing both of them. Blaise is especially amazing, with themystery, the wit, the charm, ahh...and Hermione, with her being unable to face non-textbook resolved problems. Silly Hermione. Harry with his being more observant than Ron, also nice characterization.
But where is the "adult" ness in this fic? I appluad you for plot, and hope you can write your hot stuff as well as you wrote this excellent plotty little chapter. Please email me when you update! I love where this fic is going. A nice slow buildip is a nice, refreshing change from the plotless drivel one sometimes encounters on this site (although some of the plotless stuff is not drivel, and is really wowzer).
Thanks for the great read! You have made the fact that I'm procrastinating against an essay utterly and totally worth it. :)
Blaise is so dashing. So gorgeous! When he mussed his hair and made it all dishevelled...that had me going, that did. I got all flustered. And the leg move, whoo! I wish I was in Hermione's place. Good ol' Blaise.
I think you did an excellent job of characterizing both of them. Blaise is especially amazing, with themystery, the wit, the charm, ahh...and Hermione, with her being unable to face non-textbook resolved problems. Silly Hermione. Harry with his being more observant than Ron, also nice characterization.
But where is the "adult" ness in this fic? I appluad you for plot, and hope you can write your hot stuff as well as you wrote this excellent plotty little chapter. Please email me when you update! I love where this fic is going. A nice slow buildip is a nice, refreshing change from the plotless drivel one sometimes encounters on this site (although some of the plotless stuff is not drivel, and is really wowzer).
Thanks for the great read! You have made the fact that I'm procrastinating against an essay utterly and totally worth it. :)
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent! I've been looking for a good B/H fic and you didn't let me down. Seems you have a tallent for het. and same-sex pairings. Good job.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really liked it so far! plz continue (if u are)
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story
It has a lot of potential and your grammar is great
So congratulations on writing such an amazing first chapter!
I cannot wait to read more
Peace out and until next time
Love TiffANY
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It has a lot of potential and your grammar is great
So congratulations on writing such an amazing first chapter!
I cannot wait to read more
Peace out and until next time
Love TiffANY
: )
: D
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
grate! is there going to be ch. 2? if so e-mail me when you post it. ^_^
~love iz-e-ma RR
~love iz-e-ma RR
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! You did a very nice job of making the story believable and I wish there was more. Happy Holidays.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the story I can't wait to read more! :) Glad you have joined us in the Blaise ship! :D
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've gotta kiddin'...! Honestly, you need to write this story until the end. Your writing is great plus interesting style...please,please...I can't wait to read more....
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was good!
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! I love it. and definitely think you can write it. Hehehehe cant wait for more. More more more please. Please update soon.