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for A Freak of Nature

by xenija

person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter but i cant wait for the next.
person Avanell
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Poor Harry...she doesn;t want him to oblige :) Come on, Blaise!!!
person angel
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im glad they did not blow up at mione ... please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Anon
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really good!OMG!
person Lady Lynn
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your change that gave her background, but i'm not religious in the slightest. It was a good chapter and I'm glad that Ron was accepting of her becaue in so many stories he's not. Can't wait to see what she says to Blaise!
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome!
person pickles87
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. waiting for more. p
person angel
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .. i hope she can tell him soon ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Lady Lynn
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter gets better and better and I get pulled more and more into the story. Just one thing, and I don't want to offend you or anything but I was surprised to see that you have a beta as this chapter is riddled with grammar and spelling errors, so you might want to check it over again if it your intent to put up perfect or close to perfect chapters to begin with. But I really love this story and can't wait until the next chapter is up.
person pickles87
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurray up with the next chapter the suspense will kill me... great chapter. waiting for more. p