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for Contempt

by coldlipstick

person Ryo
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a nice story, but, it would help tremendously if you knew the difference between "their", "there", and "they're" as well as "you're" and "your". Just the simplest of grammar mistakes can turn a person away. Spell check in MS word can fix these things.