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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! You tease you! How could you stop there? It was getting really good. Love the story and can't wait for more. One suggestion though... You might need a beta to look over it again as there were a few mistakes but they can be easily fixed in no time. Keep up the good work.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 5! Must have more!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good story! Can't wait to see what you do with it next!
//LoveGD
//LoveGD
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very unique spin on Severus and Harry as familial relations. How will Snape get Harry out of the house alive? Please continue soon and it's so sad that Harry is discovering a close family member who wants him only to lose her to death again. When will the boy ever catch a break? You write very well by the way.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I, personnaly, think you have done well so far. Please do continue with this tale. Of course I am wondering if this is a bastard Dumbledore who knows how Harry is treated tale.