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for Dearest Harry - Eileen's Story

by Lucie

person Nikki
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Updates! I love this story so much. It's really believable compared to some other stories and it's nice to read a story where Harry is related to Severus but not his son. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
person Jan
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is really great. Please update soon. ^__^
person sak
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I have enthusiastically been reading this story and looked forward to this chapter. Wow! Quite the turn of events compared to the previous one. Just when I thought Harry was getting on good footing with himself and his place in life, he gets slapped upside the head. I feel so bad for him as he felt such peace and contentment then Severus lets his issues fall on Harry's shoulders. I wish it did not have to be that way, but Severus let his mouth run away with him. Setting up how he wanted to speak and what Severus actually let fly was an interesting contrast. I so did not expect the ending to your chapter and it just makes me want to read the next one to see what will happen. I hope Eileen will take a piece out of her son's hide!
person crissy
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
crazy.
person MrGalion
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, Anger leads to truth.
person Dragenphly
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this - I utterly adore and love this story. I just love Harry and Draco's characterisation and I love that Harry has a grandmother, and that he's so powerful but still so humble and so so so sexy and yum! Thank you and PLEASE more!
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it!
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Smile. Smile. Smile. Smile. I loved it. I loved it. I loved it. 'Can't WAIT for more. It was perfect.

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon! (Plus, I love you for making Harry bottom-ish in the bedroom. Yay!)
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, I also loved how Draco began to say 'fuck' in every other sentence when he was trying to explain his feelings to Harry. I get the same way, but Draco is much better at it, I assure you.

Oh, and DRACO IS TOP! Yay! Yeah! Thank you so much, once again, for that detail. YAY!!!! =DDDDDDDDDDDDD

Much, much, much, much, much love,

LJ

PLUS, once again, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! =D
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was perfect! I so need ch 19!!!