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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW VERY VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
BYE BYE
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
BYE BYE
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gish this is one of the best stories I have ever read but my oh my what a cliff hanger please update soon and great job
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What has Ginny done? I soooo need chapter 29!
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh....evil cliffy.
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sure that you hear this plenty of times, but please update soon. I really love this story and can't wait for more. ^_^
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May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, it is fantastic. Your writing skills are great - I don't think I saw many - if any - grammatical errors of any sort, which is an improvement to a lot of writer's skills on this site and countless others, so great work.
However, I have to ask - and I don't mean to sound rude or offensive in any way - but it sounds like you like to speak in questions. I've noticed throughout this whole story that you do, indeed, speak in question form. Is there a reason for this? It's not a bad thing, at least not entirely, just confusing a bit. I don't know if the characters are asking a question (retorically, and to themselves), or if they are just reasoning with themselves in a way.
Are you English, because then I can understand why you speak in questions, as I am also English (who has recently moved to USA), and sometimes speak in question myself. This is just an inquiry, so please don't think I'm trying to offend.
Again, your story was great - even though it was slow getting to the main events and had much less dialogue than I would normally perfer to read, and a lot more descriptions and thoughts. I did notice that you have a tendency to repeat a bit of what is going on in the story, such as mentioning events that occured, more than once. My advice is to not over to this too much, because it has a tendency to make the story much longer then neccessary, and could have to potential of making the reader loose interest really fast.
That is just advice - something that was given to me in one of my story reviews, and I took it to heart, I did. This story, seeing as you have quite an amount of reviews - all of which are possitive - didn't loose readers' interest, not even mine, so I have to say that you did very well writing it.
I know, this review probably makes no sence, and to be honest, I'm confusing myself just writing it, LOL. So, therefore, I shall take my leave now.
GREAT STORY!
Twinphoenix
However, I have to ask - and I don't mean to sound rude or offensive in any way - but it sounds like you like to speak in questions. I've noticed throughout this whole story that you do, indeed, speak in question form. Is there a reason for this? It's not a bad thing, at least not entirely, just confusing a bit. I don't know if the characters are asking a question (retorically, and to themselves), or if they are just reasoning with themselves in a way.
Are you English, because then I can understand why you speak in questions, as I am also English (who has recently moved to USA), and sometimes speak in question myself. This is just an inquiry, so please don't think I'm trying to offend.
Again, your story was great - even though it was slow getting to the main events and had much less dialogue than I would normally perfer to read, and a lot more descriptions and thoughts. I did notice that you have a tendency to repeat a bit of what is going on in the story, such as mentioning events that occured, more than once. My advice is to not over to this too much, because it has a tendency to make the story much longer then neccessary, and could have to potential of making the reader loose interest really fast.
That is just advice - something that was given to me in one of my story reviews, and I took it to heart, I did. This story, seeing as you have quite an amount of reviews - all of which are possitive - didn't loose readers' interest, not even mine, so I have to say that you did very well writing it.
I know, this review probably makes no sence, and to be honest, I'm confusing myself just writing it, LOL. So, therefore, I shall take my leave now.
GREAT STORY!
Twinphoenix
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May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was very very very good keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this is very well written story. I love the new idea's you've brought into it, healing powers, animangus potion ingrediants, and so on. I origianly read this story at fanfiction.net but then I saw it at adultfanficton.net where it had even more chapters, to say I was happy would be an understatement, I just had to re-read it and I cand definatly say I wasn't dissapointed! I look forward to reading more of your story with anticipaton. Hope this find you well.
~Lady Serenity
~Lady Serenity
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haahhahaaa! Severus Snape, Potions Master, Member of the Order of the Phoenix, Great Greasey Bat of Hogwarts, Bane of the students', and the Badass Super Spy (whom Moldyshorts thinks is actually a double-agent, the fool) has been tamed!! The thorn has been pulled, the boil lanced, the poison drawn out, etc...
How the mighty have fallen. Ahhh, the power of love and forgiveness!
How the mighty have fallen. Ahhh, the power of love and forgiveness!
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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I sooo need chapter 28! Draco has to understand. I'm glad Narcissa does.