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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, this story really needs to be completed.
Yes, there are some minor grammar and spelling issues, but the potential... oh the potential that is there. Let's just say, that this is already really hot, and can easily get even hotter, so please update this.
Yes, there are some minor grammar and spelling issues, but the potential... oh the potential that is there. Let's just say, that this is already really hot, and can easily get even hotter, so please update this.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still hoping your going to carry on with the story as it's one of the hottest here. I can't wait to see what happens with the four of them.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Any chance of a new chapter, this is a really hot story but you haven't updated in a while. Hope you continue soon I was really enjoying it can't wait to see what happens in the coming chapters. Update soon please :)
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hung in there reading through ch.5 and I think this story line is pretty good but it really needs a beta. It would make it a much more enjoyable read. It seems to me that english may not be your first language. I would be happy to make corrections for you. Feel free to send it to me. I think it could be much more successful and would recieve alot more reviews. Jaimie
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story and am waiting for the next chapter. hope to see more soon.
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well, that was just way too much fun. A few minor grammar issues, but a lovely story anyway.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice, and now the fun can really start with the four of them. Keep it up.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you are doing anything between Harry & Ron make Ron the bottom.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
go on
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE
BYE BYE