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for Tomorrow

by eyesemerald

schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's quite sad. Nicely done. I think it would have been better if you hadn't mentioned Mungos, but I could be wrong. Great story idea.
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, I am crying right now. It was so sad. I loved it..but so sad.
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was sad... and weird... good, mind you... but sad all the same.
person Seph7
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww!!! That is soooo sad!!!! It needs a happy ending!!! *soppy romantic piscean gets a sound whack around the head!*
person Rabidsqurl
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. I really liked the way you let it unfold. It kept me on the edge.
person Kuri
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! THE ANGST!!!! I promised myself I wouldn't cry.. but I am! damnit!
Great story, it would be even better without the angst though LOL!
person Lucy
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How sad. That made me almost want to cry. It was really well writen as well. I thought the last couple lines were very good especially.
The only bit of critism that I have is, I think that you made the orderly/doctor explain a little too specifically, and it took away from the feeling of the story. Once I read "he's been with us a St. Mungo's etc. etc." line, I figured out what was going on. I think that some parts of the Doctors dialogue was fine, but maybe it was just a little too much
Sorry I can't be a little more specific.
Other then that though it was really really good, I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
person Ariel S.
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work...Wow...I'm impressed, and I love it. Good luck with more fics.
person LovingAllOfSevviePoo
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It's so delightfully sad, but I love it nonetheless.
person Erik
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad....Poor Harry


In other words....Brilliant.