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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OI! hurry up and update so i can find out what the hell harry's talking about! *good thing they escaped though, i though pickles had paralyzed draco last time =P*
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wait on pins and needles for every chapter and am never disappointed. I have read probably close to a thousand fanfics and can tell you Pickles is absolutely one of the nastiest bad guys. Love to hate him and positively love you. Keep up the good work.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, when the poor dog was killed I was ready to stop reading, but the story up to that point was so good I just had to finish. Now I'm glad I went on. (^^,) Ugh, I just want Ginny to get lost! As with all of those who just keep butting into Harry and Draco's relationship. I was suspecting that the memory was tampered with or Blaise was making it up or whatever, but I'll just have to see, won't I? Please update soon. (~.^)
person kh
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww man! I found this story, stayed up until the ungodly hours finishing.. and its not complete! AAAUUUGH!
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he didnt say them WTF whats going on? more!!!
person ZooArmy
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's more than like. I LOVE this story! (^.^)
person ed
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, there! I'm Ed from the Philippines. Let me just say that I enjoy reading your story. I do hope that updates would come in regularly. I'm always checking the website everyday, hoping for updates. Your story is very unique, and you have a knack of keeping us glued to your story. Keep it up!
person QueenB
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 27 I'm so happy to see the boys back safe and relatively sound although it happened almost too quickly for me. Where was the rape and the torture? I'm not into those things; I was just expecting them and it was a bit of a letdown not to have them.

Hermione Granger once again displays the intelligence and moxie that made me fall in love with her when I first read about her. Smart girls are never to be discounted.

Harry sounds absolutely sure of himself when he says that Draco never said those things. I wonder if his certainty comes from knowing Draco's character or whether he has incontrovertible proof like a letter or video. Maybe it was something Pickles said...

Thanks for the update. I've been looking forward to this.
person cocoke5
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just got dong reading your story and found out it is real good and can not wait for more of the story and see what harry say that droca didnot say that in the meromys. i can not wait up date soon,. because ifound that this story is real good ...
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He didn't say them?? Talk about shocker. I hope for a fast update. I am really interested to see how this will end.