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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

person Lucy
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I liked how you ended this chapter, it's bittersweet. I hope Draco goes back to Harry. Thanks for the story. Lucy
person yaoified
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story! i can't wait until more!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray for loop holes!!! Go Harry! (Did Draco just run out the room naked?) hehe

Keep up the great work! (And Happy Easter.)
person Roozette
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yippie skippie!!! Draco's free! Woot woot!

That was an INTENSE chapter. Man I love this story. Our poor boys have been through Hell. Update as soon as possible!!

Kisses!
Roo
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God that chapter was intense. I had to take a breather before I reviewed. Im so glad Draco is free now. Harry is so understanding of Draco and I love him for it! I cant wait for the last two chapters!
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent new update. And what a place to leave it in...Please post more soon :)
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You and I have VERY different views on favorite ways for a chapter to end... LOL! I like chapters to end with good sex, NOT horrible cliffhangers!!! :P
person tsujton
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never thought I'd say this, but
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
Erm, actually, yes. A good cliffhanger (is that an oxymoron? :)
And I like my boys best when they are in trouble.
person tsujton
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great and revealing chapter.
Dare I say...poor Ginny?
She was certainly mentally unstable. But being Evanescoed? How awful! (and clever of you)

I know what you mena about anagrams. I spent a looooong time coming up with a good one for Severus Snape in my story (shameless plug: Regarding Harry)

But really I feel the most for poor dear Draco. What's to become of him? And will Harry pull his head out of the martyr sack long enough to figure out sommat is wrong???
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG please don't make us wait too long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have read cliffhangers, but this one takes the cake. Great chapter, you feel just like you are Draco, very compelling stuff.