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Awww... How perfect! I loved it!

Oi.. that last part was really worth it *g* finally he got it with all the frustration and the anguish set aside.. but that botched love confession, just adorable!! Give us the last chapter!!
Cat

You updated! You updated! And it was all because I asked you to. *preens*

Ok, I'm over myself and back to reality. Seriously darlin, I loved this chap! I can see where it could be frustrating to write, because the conversation between Harry and Draco had to be handled in such a way, and then Draco's moment of blinding realization... but you handled it beautifully! And the sex scene? Was really sweet! Do you have any idea how weird it feels to write the word "sweet" just now? But it was! It was perfect and hot and beautiful and I just love love love you!

Are you going to be able to wrap this story up in just one more chapter? Because you have the trial... then the reactions... then the justifications/repercussions... then the mini-epilogue or "what now?" moment... Man, I am ever so glad you have it mostly written already! This whole story has been just wonderful from beginning to end. So original and clever and tummy-clenching angry in parts. I want to hug it! But I tried hugging my laptop and.. erm.. yeah, not so much.

I'm done rambling now. Just wanted to remind you that you are fantabulous and I hope you continue to write.

Kisses, Love, and Cookies ~
Roo

Lovely

How in God's green earth could you not be happy with that! Good lord, I can hardly type. Seriously I am abusing the back space key like no body's business. I am almost sorry to see this one end. Great ride so far, definitely on my top ten, and that is saying somthing as I have been reading avidly for over 2 years.

Sooo need chapter 33!!! Beautiful! Draco almost messed things up badly! I hope the trial goes well!

I really miss this story! Please update soon. Sorry to hear you were in the hospital for a time. Hopw all is well with you now.

Kisses!
Roo

You absolutely must continue this! It's one of the better Harry/Draco stories I've ever read, though it is admittedly confusing at times, I can usually make sense of it if I just keep reading. Good writing...it might be just me but sometimes in the midst of action your descriptions tend to get a little bit confusing...but if I keep reading I end up figuring it out. I only bring it up because most of the time author's jut hear "good job!" and "udate soon", we rarely get material to better ourselves with. Again it could be just me, and despite those brief moments of confusion I am aboslutely in love with this story. Please do continue soon!

~Reigh~

Ch. 31 Ha! Very clever--and the Gryffindor figured it out. Take that, Slytherins! I saw something like that once on a TV show called "Gargoyles" but this solution didn't occur to me. Now that it works, they can use it on the other bonded slaves. I'm sure that will be next and Draco's role in figuring it out will weigh heavily in his favor regarding his past crimes.

OMGoodness!!! What a wonderful chapter!!!! *grin*