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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

person Dragenphly
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think Draco is Hilarious! He's so paranoid. Of course, he would be, but it's just amusing that he can't seem to grasp the fact that Harry doesn't really want him for that. And Harry - oh, you've written him perfectly, and I love him, with his maimed animals, and squibs. He's just so...white knight. And I like him that way *grins* Brilliant stuff, one of my favourites onsite.
person Clau
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! Yeah, Harry has definitely gone mental!! Draco must be already planning how to escape Perfectly Mad Harry now XD Or HE'LL be the next barn to explode! X3
person RabidSqurl
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really like it. Really really. My vocabulary actually escapes me. Please update soon. <33
person Draconayzia
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O Holy shit!

I hope harry brings charges against Slughorn. That or figures out some way to make him relive what he did to Draco. Or both.

I'm vindictive. I admit it.

Keep writing! ^^
person Marille
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could vent the way Harry did... A perfect way to rid yourself of all that tension and stress *grin*
Personally, I keep asking my friends and family for a soundproof padded room with the lock on the inside. "crosses fingers and makes the wish again*
person wizli
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel like I want to explode something, but I don't have any barn at hand... I want to scream, I want to rage, I want to hug Draco and pet him and car for him. I want to kick him, too. He's still a slimy bastard.

This chapter is darker than the previous but the plot is evolving, tickening. It's stronger and the feelings are raw but much, much better and full of spirit, good work. I really like the way you're writing this and I'm dying to read the rest, but I still hate you a bit for that Slughorn part... yucks!, that was evil of you!. Very BAD mental images, I'll have to go and wash my brain now! *laughs*
person omizu
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I vote for more! More story, more frustrated Harry and Smexy Draco!
person LoveGD
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Keep up the good work, and update as fast as you can!
//LoveGD
person americanXminority
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay. So...I'm confused at that last part.
But, of course, I'm sure you MEANT it to be like that right?
Anyway, update soon yeah?
You gotta clear up some shit, lawls.
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think its coming together quite nicely. lol, Can't wait to see what happens next!