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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

person jojo
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, there's just one word to describe Harry: DENIAL!!! I loved it, it was really hot. You're a good writer! And I really don't think your english is bad! So please continue and update soon!
If you don't mind my asking, what is your mother language?
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story and what a mean cliffy! Get me more soon! :-)
person RabidSqurl
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, shot DOWN!! I feel sorry for Draco. Great job on chapter 8! Nice and steamy. Hooray for updating! I had been looking forward to this story for so long. :D
person stef
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* ........ *blinks again*....... woah! detailed! Harry, the hell are you doing man! Draco's offering his naked body up to you and you say 'you don't like it'?!?!? Maybe we should admit Harry back into St. Mungo's... O.O
Please please update again soon
Stef
person wizli
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!. So many things happened in this chapter, but what I liked the most is that I haven't any idea about what you'll write next! ^^^. Mmmm, the twins are extremely dangerous to Draco, in so many ways... About Harry's actions, no comment *grins*.
person rabidsqurl
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, chapter seven was wonderful. <333 I'd been waiting fairly anxiously for an update. Love what you've done with these characters, absolutely loving it. The tension between them is driving me nuts!
person dm999
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh very interesing. I hope to read more SneakySlytherin!Draco and also if is not much to ask more Dominant that Harry, I know that as of right now Harry seems more Dom but Harry needs protection and care and Draco needs to feel more in control, be again his usual arrogant pureblood Slytherin.

Please update soon, this story has sooo much potential.

bye
DM
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8!
person Olwen
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Crazy, intensely crazy. I love it!
person tsujton
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing story. Is there a mailing list to be informed of updates?