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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

person butterpie
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done indeed! I somehow realized that Draco actually needed to express himself to Harry, and show just how much he cared for his former master. The Marguerites are symbolic of healing of a trama to the mind as well as the body. Thank you for such a marvelous story, and of course please continue to entrall us with more of your fertile imagination.
person meEksiNs
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Either Harry is EXTREMELY insecure or he is just teasing Draco or something happened with his serious get together with the Weasleys or Potter is just simply nutters.

WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT??!!

Thanks for sharing this marvelous fic! Please, update soon!

person genna
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is impressive.

The inner voice sequences are unsettling because Draco's self-esteem is so low. His self defense is to always think the worst and push his loved ones away when he feels threatened. It reminds me too much of me at my most vulnerable times when I have too little trust.

I honestly think you crossed the line from ordinary fic, to original pronunciation of serious human sentiment.
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH Jesus...I nearly screamed when I read the ending....before I remembered there would be an epilogue. I just hope the epilogue does not end up like this chapter!! I am so sad that this fic is done. I am hoping to read more stories from you though!! It has been wonderful darling! I shall see you at the epilogue!
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Totally rockin LOVE this story! So very filled with angst, happiness, intrigue and emotion!

I wonder if they'll ever get to bring Ginny back?

Hope you update again soon!
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGWTFBBQ!!!

next one please!!!
person lilly
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh!!!! no! Please update soon! Please!
person butterpie
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you're back. and with more amazing things going on too! Finally Draco is free and a wizard once more, and all because of one Harry Potter. The way you left this tale seems to hang on whether Draco still wants Harry in his life or not. I expect Harry knows that Draco needs his freedom and the right to choose what to do with his newly restored independence. You've managed to spin a mighty fine tale, and I have enjoyed ever dip and curve in the ride, and as it pulls into the final lap home I wish you could hear me clapping my hands. So here's to you kid and please continue.
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please say this wonderful story has a happy ending. Please?
person Catigizmo
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing read. It almost put jk rowling to shame keep up the great work