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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

person Darkless
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Draco seems quite gleeful over Harry's desicion. Hehehe
person Takhen
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is well done. It has been a long time since I read anything as enjoyable. I look forward to more in the future, and thank you. You should be proud of your talent.
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 16!
person Danine
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really lovely and well written. I've only gotten to part 7 yet, but I wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed it as of yet. I'll try and get the rest in before bed, I'm so excited to see what's going to happen! I love your Harry, he's so hot and hot-headed. And Draco is such a mystery yet! I love the pets and everything so much. Brilliantly written, so captivating!
person Dezra
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh, I love that last line, "Help me Harry". I'm finding it really interesting watching both of them adjust themselves to this new situation. Harry accepting the power he has and Draco realizing his boundaries.
Great chapter.

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person berkie88
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ow, this is going to be... well, something! Ginny won't be nice that's for sure. will she be there just for the 'relationship' she wants/thinks she has? or because of the twins? and how it goes depends on Harry and Draco... I can't see Draco being nice either but Harry... so I can't wait for it!
speaking of the twins, I wonder what is going on/went on over at Grimmauld Place? and what happened to Zabini? I take it he was the one hit by the knife Harry took from Draco's braid?
will the Squib twins be around soon? that would make it even tenser...

about the contracts: can't the Owner release the Property? or change the contract? just because the Property and outsiders couldn't do anything... I take it they will find a way to break it eventually?
hope for more soon!
person lilbekki
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooo how mean is that, what a cliff hanger!!! :( update soooon plesae :D
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 15!
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I knew I didn't hate Ginny for no reason!!!!
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ruh Roh! Someone's in big trouble!