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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Harry. Aww silly Draco in the trash. What a day for them.
person LeeB
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
* shaking *
I just found this story, and I've spent the evening reading it straight through. Incredible. You are showing us stong, complex men who are each scarred and trying to heal. I love this view of Draco, especially. He's a survivor - tough and adaptable. Great stuff. This is going to be a favorite.
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm stunned. Poor Harry can't deal with much more guilt. Good thing Draco is there. (Did I really say that? lol)
Love your writing style. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Thank you!
person Alyss Luna
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I want more! Great job! Please update soon! ^^
person Samantha
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lord woman, update more often or I'll cry. ~water eyes and trembling lips~

I luuuuuve you.

You are an amazing writer, and I envy you're style emensly. You have a gift and should write a book one day.
I'd buy it. Because thats how good you are and I am amazingly picky of what I read. So keep writing and updating.

You'd let shit loads of people down if you stop.

SO DON'T!
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! What an amazing chapter! *sigh* I loved Draco waking up, and missing Harry. Finding the notes in the trash...that just took my breath away. Wonderfully done. And, there at the end, I was crying right along with Harry. This story just gets better with each part. I am really looking forward to reading more. Thank you very much for the update! :-)
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww... damn... poor Harry... wow... this story has one simpathizing with a murderer.... well... he's sexy... so of course we feel bad for him ^_^ who wouldn't? Besides it's a fictional story so yeah... it's okay...

Loving every bit of this by the way... blew off my mum to read it, so update soon yeah? ^_^
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, this is getting better all the time. I need more. It's almost like a drug that I can't get enough of. I neeeeeeeeed more pleeeeeeeeeease
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was definitely a cliffie!! please update soon!! do you have any certain pattern of updating!? coz if you do, please tell me!!
person Petalsoft
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I've just spent the afternoon reading your amazing story. Sexy, emotional and very, very well written. I'm definately looking forward to more. I love this relationship and all the complications you've brought to it. Such depth. Fantastic job!