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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

person Ellanath
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MERLIN'S BALLS!!! WTF!! GAHHHH I hate cliff hangers!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!?!?!?!?! You update and THIS is what you give us!?!?!?! I want the next chapter and I want it YESTERDAY! lol...

Poor Jack... :( What is going to happen to Harry and Draco? I need to know!
person kalaway
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!!???!!! 8X
I was formulating a whole review in my head about how both of them were dunces and should just tell each other the truth and get it over with already and then you throw that in.
What the hell??????
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is very sadening, but also, enough to make me await the next chapter. I get the feeling Draco at the party is not the same Draco that just got stunned. Or is he?
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What?
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I need chapter 34! Who is casting?
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!! No more nightmares!!!!! WHY?!?!? Just some more happiness please. LOL... What a cliffhanger! :( Loved those sex scenes though and how they showed the development of their relationship.
person Roozette
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*deep deep sigh* Oh Gods I love this story. You have an amazing talent with the written word and I am so thankful you turned that talent onto our favorite boys! This story breaks my heart and makes me happy at the same time. Is that even possible?? I can't wait until Draco has his magic back and feels more like a wizard. And Harry, *sigh* wow, I love the way you nailed the characters and made them seem human and realistic. Love the way the boys have already fallen for each other but can't admit it!!

Roo
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a cruel mean place to leave it!!!! I've just sat here and read it from the beginning and I looked for the little Next arrow and it wasn't there. Talk about frustrating a person???? When can we expect the next chapters (yes, plural - more than one). This is such a fantastci story, I have to have more!!!!!!! Hurry?? Please!
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a nack for keeping us all impatiently awaiting the next chapter. It's great as always, and I will await the next chapter. Patiently, I hope =]