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by eyesemerald

schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was a good one, I bet that those waskoley weesleys had something to do with it. Gred and Forge could make anything happen to look like a real memory. So glad that Harry sees it for what it is. Thanks for the update, know what you mean about RL..... my mother's coming for Christmas......... my, my do I need my fics now. Escape, escape, escape...... did I mention that I need an escape?
person kalaway
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Please keep updating!
I thought from the beginning that it was some sort of altered memory. Harry can get Draco out of the ministry mess!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 28!!! OMG!!!
person tsujton
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!
What a place to stop! This is great!
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how this will end. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. I'm a hopeful fool, hoping that Harry and Draco will make it out.
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who didn't stand a chance? Who!?!?!?!? I need to know! Please update again soon! Pretty pretty pretty please...
person arealdeal
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear lord, please don't make us wait for so long? Sure hope that stupify came from Harry and not Pickles.
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn poor them!
person QueenB
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 26 Damn, it looked like that plan would have worked. I guess having other people joining in would be something that Draco hadn't anticipated.

I read your response to my LJ inquiry. Thanks for getting back to me so quickly. I'm glad Harry's friends are looking for him although it's unlikely they'll guess what has happened. The idea that he might have been snatched by an ex-Death Eater pimp wouldn't be the first thing to enter their minds. So they might start with the list of his enemies...which would be a long one.

After having seen what was in that Pensieve, Hermione might decide to chat up Blaise Zabini. However, I thought the scene in that little bubble was a little fishy. Blaise turned his back on Draco when he was in disgrace and starving. Why would Draco suddenly trust him again and boast of his plans to seduce Harry? To trust so quickly, with Harry just a few feet away, in a public space, seems very foolhardy and nothing at all like the subtlety of a cunning Slytherin. I wouldn't be surprised if the whole thing was faked somehow. People can alter images with a camera. Who's to say Pensieve "memories" can't be tampered with as well?
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! I soooo need chapter 27!!! Draco!!! Harry is fighting the hexes and the potion. Is it enough?