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for Broken Toy

by eyesemerald

schedule August 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I smiled and shed a few tears as well!
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow... I've just finished reading the whole story through from chapter 1 until the epilogue. I'm totally hooked with the story that I spent the last two days to read this story through. I'm looking forward to more Draco/Harry stories from you.. ^^
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such a fabulous story! Although I'll start out with something that is supremely bothering me...did Ginny ever come back? lol I completely detest her character...but I searched though the chapters, and it doesn't seem like you ever had her reappear. I'll pause for a second so that I can laugh hysterically over that fact. All in all, wow. I can't even wrap my head around the number of hoops you had Harry and Draco go through to get to this ribbon-present-Draco event. I sort of had a moment of clarity over the biggest obstacle, at the end of the chapter before Harry discussed with Hermione how he found out the memories were false. But that is mostly due to the fact that you mentioned Ginny right before that point. I loved and thought it was very clever how you wrapped the deal with Draco's contract. Although as far as the Draco-no-magic law went, I had hoped that even after Draco was a wizard again, Harry would be smart or otherwise to ask Draco to marry him. Especially since that was such a sore spot when it was first introduced. What you did to Ginny was clever too. This is my first time hearing Evanesco doing something like that, and I also liked how Draco used transfiguration against Pickles. Those are really the big things sticking out for me, but like I said, I can't believe the roller coaster you've put us all through. lol Wonderful job.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!!! The story is finally completed!!!! omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!! hehehe! <3

I absolutely loved the ending. It was so beautiful and touching. Everything kind of came back to play when Harry opened that box. This was an absolutely fantastic story. Actually, since the story was finally completed, I just re-read the whole thing from start to finish throughout this whole day. It took quite a bit of time, but it was definitely well worth it. Keep up the fantastic work, I hope this won't be your last story.
person QueenB
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue Excuse me for not reviewing this story before now. I got sucked into a website featuring Harry/Severus slash and have been caught up in that since March or April. Ho boy.

I'm so happy to see the two guys get together after all this time. It seemed incredible that Draco would need action to understand Harry's feelings. Surely that's a Gryffindorish trait. Then again, Draco is probably used to people lying to him. That scene in the alley was very convincing; too bad that reporter spoiled it. Hadn't the idiot ever heard of covert surveillance that doesn't use a flash? Moron.

That final scene with a nude Draco wearing only a bow was very provocative. It's too bad more of these stories don't come with pictures, hm?

schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am soooo going to miss this story!!!
person Mangacat
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah well.. what an extraordinary end!! Couldn't have been done with it any better!! Let's just see what you come up with next time for sure!
Cat
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
perfect ending, loved it to pieces!
person HYPNOTIC_porcelain.x
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely mad.
i usually lose interest in stories when they are really long.
but with yours ive beeen WAITING for updates :D
and it was great.
love the end.
:D:D:D
schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! SO good! I loved loved loved the end. It's absolutely perfect. So full of emotion!!! I just love it! Yay! :)