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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely! i adore bottom!snape and you did a fantastic job here!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Severus Snape, former Death Eater, Serpent of Slytherin, Sultan of Snark, on his knees, wand up his ass, holding Harry Potter's hand, declaring with heartfelt sincerity, "I love you; never forget that.." This was priceless!!! You get my vote for what has got to be THE best visual ever!! I loved this story! Touching AND hysterically funny. Excellent job!
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!! Love his gift, i wonder if i could buy one....?
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy guacomole. And I don't even know how to spell that. Dom!Harry is such a kink, and this story... wow. I cannot express how YUM that was. I'm going to rec it at my dom!Harry site: http://web.mac.com/hazelwolf/iWeb/HazelWolf/List.html, so please tell me if I offend. Or if there's any other stories out there you've written/read that I can add. PLEASE. Um... yeah, I'm gonna go re-read now. Buh-bye!
~Hazel
~Hazel
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel pretty good about that story. I liked the role reversal of Harry and Snape, there are so many stories that have Snape being the one in control... I must say, this was pretty hot.
I was really impressed with the diction as well.
My only critism would have to be that the layout of the story didn't make a whole lot of sense. It's not so much that it's confusing as it was just... illogical I thought. Maybe a little sporadic as well.
I think that this story does very well as a one shot, and though people are sure to ask you for more, I certainly don't think you should try to write any more of this story (you didn't exactly set yourself up to do so... though, on second thought... I could see you writing something inolving Draco mixing up the pot).
However, you are clearly a very talented writer, and I look forward to reading more of what you write in the future.
I was really impressed with the diction as well.
My only critism would have to be that the layout of the story didn't make a whole lot of sense. It's not so much that it's confusing as it was just... illogical I thought. Maybe a little sporadic as well.
I think that this story does very well as a one shot, and though people are sure to ask you for more, I certainly don't think you should try to write any more of this story (you didn't exactly set yourself up to do so... though, on second thought... I could see you writing something inolving Draco mixing up the pot).
However, you are clearly a very talented writer, and I look forward to reading more of what you write in the future.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Given Lantas preference for slave stories, I thought at first that the scenes in italics would happen after Harrys birthday. The ending was a nice surprise. I can't read enough consensual D/s stories. Sadly, there aren't that many, especially with my favourite subs, Severus or Lucius. I'm all the more happy that you wrote this. You have a great writing style. Perhaps I can challenge you to write a sub!Lucius story? I don't really care about the dominant. Harry or Severus, but Narcissa and Hermione are also fun to read. Think about it!
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful read. I look forward to seeing more of your stories in the future.