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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what does "He got so badly next to me" mean?
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To Nadine
Well, as far as your
Well, as far as your
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh you must continue....update soon
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure what to think. It's soo sad Harry dies. and so dark. I CAN see though where Hermione might be this way because confusion and fear can make you a blubbering idiot. Intersting so I hope you cotinue.
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What the hell? What are you- 13? I don't know about the story line - but for God's sake! - don't leave the sentences in one big block of a paragraph. Split it down, it's easier to read. You need a spell check. Sorry, but you MUST get a beta if you want this story to get better reviews. Sorry for my cruelty but I'm re-reading my review and labeling it as CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.