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I think you did well but what happend to Draco ?

You all really love each other don't you, yes that was sarcasm
and all of you please be normal maybe for once for me pretty please
and if someone has a comment about my spelling please tell i'm not 13 if you want to know
I'm from the netherlands if that explains it all a little

Okay first off this is the first review I have ever submitted on this sight after a year of reading aff. I would just like to comment that this fanfic was not as dark as possible but good all the same. Also that hg/dm are a likely pair and that no one could really know for sure whether a couple like them could or could not get together. Just because shakspeare introduced the romeo and juliet concept does not mean all lovers who are opposite and that come from different worlds cannot come together. Thus there is no asurity in the opinion you wrote of hg/dm not being together.

i like it so far

Ok firstly to the author, this story had a good idea, I just couldn't get into it. However you seem to have the potential to be an excellent author. I commend you.

Ok moving on, to Nadine,Anon,and all of the other flamers...stop speaking or typing which ever way you want to put it. You are so petty, if MEES wanted to right a story with every single word wrong and not use one period then she has every right. She is not forcing you to read her stories, she doesn't even have to right the stories.

Oh and to continue on my rampage of bashing the other reviewers. She does NOT have to state if there is a language barrier. What if she didn't want you to know? Quit being ridiculus, petty, and completly and utterly asinine.

I love your story! Really great plot for one, very original... i could almost see it happening as a movie of some sort! Yes, you may call me crazy... You are right about the whole everyone has their own opinions thing... and i have never actually reviewed anyone's fanfiction before, so congrats for being lucky number one! I just felt the connection of this story and the depths of one's soul... or mine in particular... thank you once again for this GREAT story!

I disagree. I don't care if someone has perfect grammar, punctuation or spelling. Just that there should be some effort. If there is a language barrier, it should be stated in the beginning. It's great that people want to express themselves, but remember if you are writing and expecting a response from an audience - Be prepared! Having a sense of humour helps too.

Please look at your writing and read it out loud. If it sounds good that way, then it is usually okay.

Wow! That's just sooo rude from you, guys!! I have already read enough stories, which were so ubearable to read because of mistakes, but this story, i should notice is not that bad as Nadine and others claim it to be. To my mind,it is really possile to read it and understand.
Mees, take their notes into account, but do not pay too much attention.

since you didnt have the courtesy to even attempt to write in a cohesive clear manner i guess i wont bother to puntucate or put any effort in making my comment readable much like you have done you ask for reviews should we be as lazy as you