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by GryffJr

person Michelle
schedule October 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope you continue this story, it has started very welll. I love a hermione/snake time turner story!!!!
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh loving so far..I do hope you keep it up..is there anywhere else you have this posted?? hopeing for update soon!
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful update, even if Moody did his best to annoy me:-))
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this story gets better and better with every chapter. Although could benefit from some minor editing, the story & characterizations are very well done. Thanks.
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic story, I am so happy i found it! I have mixed feelings about time-turners, i find them utterly boring when the main goal is to change nothing at all, and i find them totally interesting when the plot is to change what went wrong the first time (Why on earth spend time on a time-turner that doesn't change anything? if status quo is the same at the end as it was in the beginning, why write/read it at all?) That said, I really love your plot so far and I find it very well written. i don't know who you will end up saving, I hope that it is mostly the bad that dies, even if i am pretty sure you will "kill off" some nice ones too. While my high hope is that the prophecy about Harry will never see the ligth of day, thus leaving both him and Neville a childhood with parents and friends. If you "have to" kill James and Lilly, would you at least make sure that the rigth guy gets the blame, meaning Peter is exposed and Sirius don't have to spend 12 years in Azkaban for something he didn't do. A free Sirius would also benefit Remus, there is no way Sirius wouldn't look out for his friends. Just as interesting would be to see if you "save" other Slytherins than Severus. Not only because I want to see who you chose, but even more so because every man not in the clutch of the snakefaced idiot, makes the ligth side stronger. (You are allowed to kill Moody since he treated Hermione the way he did just because she is a woman..:-))
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I'm really enjoying this - so great to have some original elementswithin the parameters of time-travel fics. Also, I'm coveting Hermione's wardrobe! Looking forward to another good chapter soon.
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most original plots I've ever read, and I'm disappointed to see that you haven't posted since Feburary...I'm avidly praying that you continue to post, or can maybe direct me towards a completed posting of this story? I love the way you have Hermione acting like Snape...as I said, original and imo, ingenious plot line! :) Looking forward to more, or a possible link to the completed (or ongoing posting) of this story? email is: smurfgirlz@optonline.net Thanx! :)
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this story. I would love for updates to come sooner :P
person Kimjo2
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"what is the most powerful all purpose protection spell you know of?" (my question) thanks for the update. i definately like your twist on the time turner thing and i look forward to further updates.