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May 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Wow, quite an adventure. Great story. A new twist on feels fics
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December 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! You managed to combine veelas and time travel, house rivalry, and sexual tension and gave us a hot threesome with Blaise, Draco and Hermione. Steamy ending! Thank you.
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW...WOW...WOW!!!!
What an incredubly hot and erotic piece of fiction! Long, but well worth EVERY word.
Vella to a new level.
What an incredubly hot and erotic piece of fiction! Long, but well worth EVERY word.
Vella to a new level.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read this for the N-millionth time. Still one of my favorite Veela fics ever.
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to words to describe how utterly brilliant this is!
I mean, I was never a big fan of Veela fics, but this one here is just...
well, none of my words would do justice to such great story ^.^
Amazing job *_*
I mean, I was never a big fan of Veela fics, but this one here is just...
well, none of my words would do justice to such great story ^.^
Amazing job *_*
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July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. :O
Just read this for the second time, and loved it even more, if that's possible!! You combine two of my favourite things - Dramionaise (which, sadly, I can't find much of. If you have any suggestions....;) ) and Veela. And to top it all off with a pretty goddamn awesome big bow, it was AWESOMELY WRITTEN!!! Oh, and not short! Gotta love that too. :D
The other thing i truly loved was the smut. My god, can you write it! lol.
Anyway, WELL DONE on an AWESOME story!! (even the concepts were awesome. :P )
Care to write another one? ;)
Just read this for the second time, and loved it even more, if that's possible!! You combine two of my favourite things - Dramionaise (which, sadly, I can't find much of. If you have any suggestions....;) ) and Veela. And to top it all off with a pretty goddamn awesome big bow, it was AWESOMELY WRITTEN!!! Oh, and not short! Gotta love that too. :D
The other thing i truly loved was the smut. My god, can you write it! lol.
Anyway, WELL DONE on an AWESOME story!! (even the concepts were awesome. :P )
Care to write another one? ;)
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG this story is so hot. its great. i really enjoyed reading it. i love those three together.
i love how you write blaise
i love how you write blaise
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February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant!
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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Avari,
I haven't been on aff for long, and find that I'm always too shy to review. However, I must say I really loved your story 'Taste'. I find it tiresome when authors cannot use proper grammar or punctuation or spacing, but yours was excellently written in that respect, and also in terms of interest. The story was filled with passion, suspense, excitement, and the changes in the characters were realistic. You write like I wish I could write; I've tried many a time to start a story and it usually just fizzles out. I'm too busy to write long novel-length stories/fanfics, but I wish I could just write at least a one-shot! So, anyway, my highest praises and keep up the great writing! I love your other fics too, and am in the middle of reading the other longer ones right now.
Cheers,
Fyrespark
PS - I'm also a university student. How do you find the time to write? :P
I haven't been on aff for long, and find that I'm always too shy to review. However, I must say I really loved your story 'Taste'. I find it tiresome when authors cannot use proper grammar or punctuation or spacing, but yours was excellently written in that respect, and also in terms of interest. The story was filled with passion, suspense, excitement, and the changes in the characters were realistic. You write like I wish I could write; I've tried many a time to start a story and it usually just fizzles out. I'm too busy to write long novel-length stories/fanfics, but I wish I could just write at least a one-shot! So, anyway, my highest praises and keep up the great writing! I love your other fics too, and am in the middle of reading the other longer ones right now.
Cheers,
Fyrespark
PS - I'm also a university student. How do you find the time to write? :P
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmm... tasty