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I like it. Please update soon.

Chapter 10: I laughed at Lucius' organizational skills, to wit, "Never have a Plan B as it distracts from Plan A." That was hilarious. It plays right into his supercilious nature.

Oooh, nasty - Severus using his skills to probe Lucius' mind and then using the ideas for himself. Bad Snape, BAD, BAD!! And immediately adopting the new rule Lucius laid down for first names to further his own cause. BAD and SNEAKY! But clever... Snape has moved in for the kill very quickly and it looks like he'll succeed. Hermione needs a chastity belt.

Yummy, Lucius lighting up Hermione's eyes - as only he could do. I SOOOO agree. But our Draco sounds more like a teenager than a nitwit - I think sometimes those terms are just interchangeable, though, having been one myself. I liked that Lucius found his fondness for his son again. I like the stories where they're not at loggerheads best.

Snape must be either very powerful or just plain crazy to trespass on territory he knows Lucius has mapped out for himself (from looking at Lucius' thoughts). Lucius doesn't share his toys with anyone! (Hmmm, if I added a little body paint, could I pass for a toy, do you think?)

Update soon. I'll be waiting. Thanks for the great chapter!

Loved it! Poor hermione doesn't know what to do! Severus is trying his best to persuade her over to his side. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Hey, you might not want to believe it, but that actually is the FIRST story that doesn

I really did like this chapter, but now I'm curious to see how Snape plans on wooing Hermione. I liked how Ron found out about Brown, that was actualy funny. She deserved it though. I can't wait to see how Ron's and Pansy's relationship will progress. Can't wait to read the next chapter, update soon please!!

The idea of Pansy and Ron is so cute.

Please update soon.

Those are some exciting new little wrinkles in your story with Snape planning on saving Hermione from Lucius's clutches. I just wonder what will become of his plan once he knows that she is pregnant? Keep up the fantastic work that you do -- you may want to think of adding this story to www.grangerenchanted.com where I am a beta. It is a wonderful, Hermione-centric site with great writers and readers.

I finally got to sit down and read the latest two chapters! ('bout time!) Anyway, I loved them! What a surprise! Blaise is Severus Snape's son? WOW! Hermione sure did give Lucius a hard time. (not that he didn't deserve it, but I nearly cried with Hermione when he broke the figurine!

I am glad he fixed it, and by doing that, I think he showed her that anything is possible, if you only let yourself believe!

Lovely story, darlin! I can't wait for more!

SD

Loved it! At least Severus knows what Lucius is up to! Wonder if he's going to tell Hermione? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!